Demeter

Hi Persephone! I'm Demeter. ;) “Yes. No! Not the scarves, they’re simply ghastly! I think this was a nice way of beginning this story - it pulled me in the ...

Hi there, Mattimias! It's not exactly Christmas Eve anymore, but I hope that's alright! As I've been saying many times during these last couple of days, I'm somewhat of a ...

To... write.

Yesss I was hoping that'd happen again when I saw we had already covered four!

Hey Wicked! So, since this is for your uni application, I'm going to be extra nitpicky. But I believe that is what you want! “I’d like to call up Tyler ...

Best: Hmm. I kind of want to say dialogue, because it's easy for me to write. Worst: Uh... sometimes I feel like I write too much dialogue? xD I also ...

I think it sounds rather interesting, because I love fairytales! I also like twists on known fairytales, so go for it. Although "Serena" reminds me too much of Gossip Girl...

Hi, Samii! I liked the narrative concept and the story in this poem. I haven't read something like this in a while, so it was refreshing. I also like rhyming ...

Hi there, RikerRayn! First of all, I would strongly recommend proofreading before you post -- by doing that, you'd notice some of the silly mistakes writers are bound to make ...

Hi, Pony! I liked the rhyme in the first stanza. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but somehow it felt very appropriate in this kind of poem. However, I ...

Hi, Drama! I liked the short scenes. It felt a bit different, and with something like this, you don't really need anything longer, especially if you're going to have every ...

Slightly updated! I added a section about whether to place the comma inside or outside the quotation marks.

Right, I realise there will probably be more girls here, but so what. Obviously, you have already planned every single tiny detail of your wedding, like: - what will your ...

Oh Mist, such a burn xD

Hi, Livluvroc! Just so you know, I moved this from Short Stories to Science Fiction Novels, as you said you had misplaced it :) Alright, so one thing that might ...