Demeter

I think it's a nice try... The flow didn't really exist, though. But the title is nice, I liked that. I kind of agree with all the people here. You ...

A subject right from the boring life! Haha. Footsteps and temples pounding, clocks ticking time away. This didn't really sound very good, it would be better if you put that ...

Yeah, let's be firends, Angelica! That's a beautiful name, by the way. :) And I just have to say that I love your username and avatar! So, welcome to YWS, ...

Angieee :) I'm Demeter! I'm 15, too ;) Welcome to YWS. I will definitely look at your poems, and just PM me if you'd like to have any reviews-slash-other things. ...

Hellooo! Yep, this is definitely a forum to stay with ;) Hope you'll like it!

I don't understand the "I wasn't, and I didn't" part in the second paragraph. I believe this is a true story, but I don't really see the point. Well, at ...

Nice topic :) There were a few things I'd like to point out, though (I can't let any story alone without ripping it to pieces :)) First of all, I ...

Well, first of all, it was kind of... short. And I'm sure that almost everyone has heard this story before. Well, of course not this very story, but you know. ...

Hey, E. This is the first short story that I've read here (I guess) and I liked it! I like stories in where the narrator is "I", if you know ...

I think this was the first story I've started to read here. And overall I liked it, though there were a few confusing parts (but Periwinkle seems to have pointed ...

You know, Lilith, I don't think this was a bad poem at all! I hope you could keep writing poems, and what I love most about this is the fact ...

If you want to tell me about something beautiful, tell me about a rose ribbon in the morning sky, tell me about a snowy forest beneath the stars: tell me ...

Oooh. I read it out loud ;) and it started to sound like some kind of spell. You know, "Bottle, bottle, speak your words..." etcetera. But that was sort of ...

Aw, gee, everyone has already said everything that should be said. I can't never do anything! ;) I'm, of course, agreeing with the article of yours, or maybe I should ...

Well hello Jennifer Lauren! I'm Demeter (well luckily that's not my real first name :)) and I'm sure you'll love this site, which I notice you already do ;) That's ...