Demeter

I liked the idea, using cliches on purpose is great, otherwise not. :) and think of you. (who's that?) --> this line made me wonder whether you'd meant "thinking" insted ...

I liked the rhyming, though some lines were too long and thus the rhyming didn't sound that good. Now you're to late --> I think you meant "too" late grownw ...

Hi there! Yeah, tell us more about yourself! What do you like to write? Read? Eat? Drink? Anything! Haha. Like Casey mentioned, this is an awesome site for young writers ...

Hi Shaina and welcome! Of course we want to know random stuff about you!! At least I do! Tell me, now! :) Seriously. Your topic, your stuff. Haha. So... what ...

Yeah, sure do, I'd like to have a look on it! Well, the others have already answered your questions but that doesn't prevent me from saying: Welcome, Muteman!!! I found ...

Hi Teo and welcome! As Casey said, this sure is an awesome site for everybody who likes to write. I don't read very much science fiction, but I do poems ...

Hello Jesse Welcome! Hmm, adventure romance sounds great :) I have the same problem as you do, I rarely manage to finish my stories. Or at least a few years ...

Hey Banango (I'm just going to call you that from now on) I believe we're all a little freaky, right? ;) A bunch of freaky writers with their freaky imagination... ...

Beautiful poem, once again. And once again, hard to review. I just don't know why that is. But nevertheless, I'm going to try. :) In my opinion, the second stanza ...

Hey John! You're so in the right place. I don't know know much about that sci-fi thing - I've never written or read it - but maybe I'll give it ...

Hmm, I liked this. But I would've liked it more if it were a bit longer :) "Love is harsh Love is kind Love is bound to make you blind" ...

It's a good thing that you critique your own work! :) Then you maybe understand better what the others are talking about. To the poem. "so this I want to ...

Very nice subject, and by editing this just a little bit you could have a great poem! I found one confusing part in the third stanza; "Your warmth makes me ...

What's with the colours? I think you're kind of cunning - would people feel so good about this poem if it didn't have colours? I found it hard to focus ...

A capital letter starts the sentence, right? :) And commas would be nice, too. And the word people has an "e" and an "o" in it. And you mustn't forget ...