Demeter

Hi Vine, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll have a good time here, especially if you like to write :) So what do you usually write? If there's anything that's ...

Edited version: zomg stop right there. Original version (if you were mean and didn't stop. But stop, for Lonely's sake. It's for the better, trust me.): "No." I tell Mom ...

Looks like someone is inspired by Jane Austen... ;) The title and Elizabeth... I suppose this takes place in the same time as Austen's (or that's how I felt) so ...

This was OK. One thing that really disturbed me was the weird space thing. So they are in Jupiter? It's more of a sci-fi for me. And you didn't really ...

Hey E :) You remember when I told you it's hard for me to review your work? Well, I can proudly say that I've figured out the reason: They're so ...

Yep, I also think you shouldn't capitalize all the words, that doesn't fit in. This was also a bit too gloomy for me. "Build Me Up To Break Me Down," ...

Good job. I liked it how you took a commonly known poem and transformed it as your own. I liked the first two lines because even though they're not your ...

So, here I am, then :) Good job! I loved, loved the first line, it's the best thing about this poem, I think. It's so beautiful. Although I suggest you'd ...

Hello :) Unfortunately I haven't studied Japanese even the tiniest bit, so I won't be able to guess your name. :) Hmmm, your writing sounds cool, I think I'll have ...

Hi and welcome! I'm from Finland, so I'm not that good in English, either. I mean, I'm not native English-speaker. But all this kinds of thiings can really help to ...

Welcome! Is this place good? Check. Am I nice? Check. Can I help you in anything you like? Double check. :) It's always nice to have newbies here :) Hope ...

Hi from half sunny, half cloudy, coldish Finland! Wow, you've won writing competitions! I bet you're good, then :) Haha, I'm not exactly a veteran yet, I've only been member ...

Hello and welcome!! This is the best site for young writers (and that's what we are!) so I'm sure you'll like it. It's always fun when someone new joins YWS ...

Hi Trinity! I like that name as well, it's pretty. I adore all kinds of names and when I write, it's the most fun part to make up names for ...

Yeah, and if your review is not long enough, it won't be counted as a review. I guess that's how they are preventing people from not saying anything helpful. You ...