Demeter

Hey Chelsi You've come to the right place if you want to improve your skills! What do you like to write? Btw, remember to post at least two reviews before ...

I didn't even realize the Jack Russell thing at first! I think it's a rather good name. Making up names for the characters is the most fun part! I like ...

I've been wondering the same thing. Though I think it's different for me as I write in Finnish and then translate it. So the published work would be in Finnish ...

This might seem a bit odd, but when and if you talk to yourself, write the conversation down afterward. I've got many good lines by doing this. :) Okay, I ...

22. dont ever use punctuation because its so boring and you just want to write as quickly as you can 23. If anyone hasn't reviewed your piece, lift it up ...

I love all kinds of names, but like Mizz, I prefer using unique-ish names. But here are some more or less common ones: First names - Alex - Megan - ...

I totally agree with Sela. If you don't tell us what the mission is, what's the point of this story? To tell that Alex Rider has a sister? It seemed ...

Hmmm, not bad at all. It's nicely written and the reader won't get bored. I didn't really spot any mistakes except for this: "Alex Rider and Sabrina" --> shouldn't it ...

It's always this kind of romantic atmosphere in new places. It's fun to imagine being for example Sara from "Little Princess" who's having a feast in the attic. Of course, ...

Hi and welcome! Karolina is quite a common name here in Finland, although it's usually spelt with two i's. "Karoliina" :) And I'll be freshman in senior high school in ...

Hi and welcome! I loved your introduction :) So you speak mostly French, right? That's génial! I study French depuis cinq ans, but I can't really say that I could ...

This is cool. "Brisk girls with rosy cheeks bow their heads, roll up sleeves." I like this part because it flows nicely and is fun to say. I like also ...

Hey Savannah! (can I call you that?) And welcome! I must disagree with you. The glass is half full. Live with it ;) haha So, what kind of stuff do ...

Hello Taylor and welcome! Posting here your work is kind of like publishing, isn't it? ;) I'd love to publish a real book someday... Or actually many. Maybe... I'd like ...

Wow, you're Chinese! That's great! What's it like in there? Welcome to YWS. I like your name, by the way :) And don't worry about your English, this is a ...