Demeter

Hi Parasky! Welcome to the site, it's a great one. I'm sure you'll love it! And I'd like to read your poems, you could maybe PM me when you've posted ...

Hey, E! Here by request :) Oh, you like my new avatar? Okay, then to the poem. I like very much about the lining and construction of the stanzas, the ...

So... it's my first song I've read in YWS and I have to say I almost love it! :) Almost, because I can't really decide whether I like this very ...

It's really good considering you wrote in such a short time! It was beautiful, and like Bittersweet said, really cute, too. I especially liked the title and the last line. ...

Hmm... I think I meant something that would completely stun me, like "Wow!". I've heard the story of the ice queen and knew what it's about when I went to ...

To delight people who like soup. Why is the door of my wardrobe too small for my painting I'd like to hang there?

Hello. The idea is sort of cool (ha!) but I think you should bring something even newer to it. I feel like I've heard this before. The stanzas not being ...

(Melkor, I think you meant to write "fortunately"?) Unfortunately, they were so shocked that they couldn't do anything.

Hi. I saw there were no reviews yet so I decided to read the piece and review it. The overall expression for me is that it kind of hits the ...

This is just awful. I'm stunned. I don't know what to do. I promised and swore to be as mean to Cinnamon as possible. I'm cracking. It's nearly impossible to ...

Okay, here I am! :) I got very interested as soon as I saw the title. It was funny. But it made me think this poem would be more about ...

Hi! Okay, here are my opinions of this piece. The first thing that got me is the rhyming. It wasn't that sharp in all the stanzas, and also, I think, ...

Hey there! First of all I would like to congratulate you for a title so catchy I wanted to get to the poem right away. "Your eyes are jazz," --> ...

Hi SK Welcome to the greatest place for young writers that you can find on Earth. Someone called it the "land of electric ink". I love it. Hmm, was it ...

Hi Lauren! I'm Demeter and we're all happy to have you here! And this is such a great place to get actually useful criticism! The best for young writers, I ...