Demeter

Welcome, Took! My name's Demeter. What can I tell you about YWS? Well, first of all, this is one of the greatest sites I've ever had the luck to see. ...

Greetings, Hazel! Welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter. You have described us perfectly: lovely, slightly scary and very clever people! And now you're one, too. Mwahaha. And my day's great, thank ...

Hi and welcome, Nathan! My name's Demeter. (Well, obviously :)) If you're wondering about the blue name of mine and a few other people like casey_kent, it means that we ...

This was actually really good. I can relate to the narrator; I've done exactly the same thing than she is and suffered from it in exactly the same way. The ...

Hi, E! I just got a feeling I'd like to read your poems right now, and here I am. The moment from hell has happened, The bite was worse than ...

This is really aggressive. I can't really even review this, timjim said it all. I'm just asking, What's the point? What's the point of hitting readers with harsh and disrespectful ...

Hmmm. First of all, it was really... short. Possibly this can't be the whole chapter? Or are you even posting this in chapters? So now I'm going to copy the ...

You know, this reminds me of the song "Twelve Days of Christmas". You know it? The repetition is similar to what's used in the song. The ending is great. Just ...

Okay, so here I am. Actually, you have made the perfect review yourself: "The structure is a little random, but I liked it." And that's exactly what I'm going to ...

Hi and welcome, Sday! I'm Demeter from sunny and warm Finland. What's your favourite writing genre? In here, I've written mostly "Other Fiction" and a few poems. I like to ...

This was a little rambling, but not bad. There were some punctuation mistakes, too. It's kind of funny that Darcie is one of her best friends but still she seems ...

Okay, I've reviewed all three chapters by now, and I'd just like to say that there's no need to post them in this form as well. So stick on posting ...

I've already guessed what will happen next! But I won't tell! That's probably due to the name of chapter four in the end of this one, but still. I was ...

Hi, it's me again. And congratulations on making me read the second part. Not many people have succeeded in that. Listening closely, I could have sworn I heard a sadistic ...

Hello there. It wasn't by far bad. But there's something missing. The structure was somehow uneven, and the meaning didn't feel very strong. What if we had a song? Could ...