Demeter

Hello, Robyn, and welcome to YWS!!!! You know, you are just in the right place for honest critique! Your writing stuff sounds interesting, I think I'll take a look on ...

Wow, thanks ever so much!! *blush*

So there are two poems, I suppose? Let's see... Anything lacking mockery. This line was full of long words that felt strange after the very short previous line. But maybe ...

Hello! You make me sad. You make me mad. You make me cry. You make me want to die. The last line breaks the flow; as you can see, it's ...

Hello! So here's the crit I promised :) I'm not a fantasy fiction expert, but I'll try my best. The screams of agony pierced the eardrums, countered by the gently ...

Hi Abbie/AJ! Welcome to YWS, the greatest place for young writers like us. Your writing preferences sound really cool, I hope you'll PM (private message) me when you've posted some! ...

That's very true what Ringo and Eimear said, but that's also true what the poem said! Well, I don't really think this as a poem, either, it's more like an ...

I know nothing about limericks so I don't dare reviewing this really. :) I have heard the name, but I don't know what's it supposed to be like. There was, ...

Hello, vicko. Let's see what I can make out of this. The structure is a little random – the stanzas are not equal. Of course, they don't always have to ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter, but you can call me also D if you haven't the patience to type the whole name, haha :) I found this site ...

Hi Jonathan/Jon/darthsythious and welcome to the greatest place on Earth (well almost), YWS! Congratulations on graduation! (See, that rhymed :D) Wow, you have such patience toward that novel! I could

Welcome, Split-Second! I'm Demeter or D for short! Your name is funny :) I like it. Yeah, I have the same problem about planning... At least I've had it. Sometimes ...

Hiii and weeelcooomeee! ;) My name's Demeter, or sometimes D for short. Yeah, tell us more, it's your topic! How did you find your way here? What do you read? ...

Hi again! Wow – Jabber has pretty much said everything there is to say. From the moment I saw the title I knew what this was about – writing! The ...

Hi, here by request! :) (Sday's right about that Holden thing. Oh, now I feel like reading Catcher again.) Okay. At first I thought "Oh, gee, where is this going ...