Demeter

Hello! Hmm... the structure is a little random. They are no clear lines or stanzas (of course, there doesn't always have to be), and there's no punctuation whatsoever. I can ...

I've definitely got the same problem than Casey here. Not with Harry Potter, though – I've read all of them and liked them – but the hit charts... AAAHH!!! No-no. ...

7. Be more or less specific. Haha :D

You have no idea how right you are.

Oh, JFW, please don't... :)

Hey Jo-Z! Welcome to YWS. I'm Demeter, D, Dem or Meter. Don't ask where all those nicknames came from, they made them! *points at other YWSers* :) You seem to ...

Hey there, Logic! Your username is irresistible. Did you know that? :) My name's Demeter (not really :D), but some people call me D, Dem, Meter etc. But you can ...

Hi and welcome! It's going very well, thanks for asking. You? :) You have beautiful username, by the way. I'm Demeter (obviously), or sometimes just D, Dem, Meter or Metre ...

Welcome, Pouxb! (How do you pronounce that? :)) What would be greater place for writing, reading and actually good feedback than YWS? That's right – nothing! :) This is seriously ...

You're third right now for the month of June, Eimear, so keep it up! Plus, you were number one for the past week until Demeter passed you sometime last night. ...

Hey, E. First of all, I'm really very sorry for you, for what you have had to go through. But I'm glad that you could turn your feelings into something ...

Aw, that was sad! And well written, I have to say. But I love British boys and the accent, too, like Casey ;) He was an exchange student, I reckon? ...

How come you're "not a writer"? I liked this story, even though I'm still wondering what was the point of it ;) Oh well, that's just me – I don't ...

Hey, Monki! Here I am! And it really doesn't make me feel better either. A comma after "better". Mom's never been a fan of speaking with her 'inside voice'. "Ow," ...

9 out of 10, really beautiful!