Demeter

Hello! I enjoyed reading this. I like your poems. Nothing left in what your saying, Your all but done in talking, Shouldn't it be "you're" in these? threadbear, Threadbare, I ...

I think this is good the way it is now. People just like different things. But, of course, try to make a story if you like!

When, oh when are they coming? I'm all excited, and I have barely gotten the fourth yellow star! :)

Hey, LT! (I'm sorry, but I refuse to type your whole name, even though it's pretty cool) I'm Demeter. Some people call me D, Dem, or Meter. And don't worry, ...

Welcome, Sam! One of my good friends is called Samantha/Sam, too! Yay! :) I'm Demeter, D, Dem, or Meter, for some reason. Choose whichever you like! Do you have any ...

Hello! I'd suggest you divide this into stanzas or then make some lines longer, some shorter. You have awfully long lines there, followed by very short ones, so that doesn't ...

YEH I AGREE LOL!!!1!

Hello! This is rather a nice poem, I think. It didn't blow me away, but it was ok. Those words are fantastic when nice After "fantastic", which is an overwhelming ...

I hope you don't really think that way. Your writing's very good. My doubtful mind is a dry well. What a good way to start a poem! At least I ...

Hello! I liked that there were words connecting the title's "princess". For example, throne, knight and sword. A sword of thoughts crash through her brain Driving her restless mind absolutely ...

This kind of writings are definitely my cup of tea. But I wouldn't call this an essay, either. Maybe... a column? At least that's what I like to call my ...

Hello! I have to admit that I laughed when I was reading this. And it's a good thing. The story itself wasn't something to laugh at, but it was so ...

Hello! Emilie had long chestnut brown hair, beautiful green eyes and sharp cheekbones. In fact, it was her eyes that had caught his attention the first time they met. Today ...

You're pretty clever, did you know? Dedicating this to us writers. Being so enthusiastic about the idea, we don't really spot any mistakes. Haha. But I liked it, though. We ...

Hello! You make me want to hold you, on the beach, watching the sun's ray. The last line is too long, it breaks the rhythm. Also, I think "watching the ...