Demeter

Hi Crystal! Welcome to YWS! I go by Demeter, or sometimes D, Dem, or Meter. (Or Metre for the British, haha :)) So what kind of things you like to ...

Hi there! Wow, a rebel? It's about time YWS got one, too. Haha :D Just remember grammar and not to use chat speak, and you'll be just fine. If you ...

Hi there, Anna-slash-Avens! Welcome to YWS! I go by name Demeter, but some people call me D, Dem, Meter, funnily enough. :) Wow, Thailand! On the mainland or on some ...

I'm sorry to say that I actually couldn't help laughing in some parts. No offense! But you need to make the characters and the happenings more believable, which they are ...

Hi. I read this the other day but I was too confused and busy to review it, then. First of all, you need to fix those capital letters and punctuations! ...

Hmm... Michael? Thanks, HC. :) You guessed wrong.

I prefer "until". :) But I think that 'til is the short for until, and till is its own word. ? Not sure, though.

Hi! The rhyming, or non-rhyming, really disturbed me as well, but then I came to think that it just made more humorous, because the words don't just rhyme the slightest ...

Hmm, would I? That really put me into thinking. I think this affected me just the way you meant it to, so good job. To me, the "Would you" repetition ...

Hi, LLS! At first I want to say good luck on the contest! :) I don't know if this is what JFW wanted, I have to say I didn't really ...

Hello, Nolan, and welcome to YWS! Okay, the topics weren't my favourites, so I'm just going to review this techinically. It doesn't seem realistic that these strangers (at first) just ...

Hi, Lilz! Welcome to YWS! My name is Demeter (not really, haha) but also D, Dem, and Meter are used. I've also been writing since I was very young! What ...

[Watch out, SIC. :)] Hello, Nove! Welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter or D/Dem/Meter, if you please. I'm from sunny/rainy/haily Finland. It's been hailing, even though it's summer! No fair! :( ...

Yay, another one of your poems! The description and the imagery are great here, I can truly imagine the things and the places. Show me effervescent white caps I love ...

Hello, monki! This was a sweet poem. Just the typical have-a-good-life-after-I've-left poem for a teacher, which it seems to be. Being a poem like that, the tellingness doesn't really matter, ...