Demeter

Hey, Bunnie! Welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter. I see you've posted two topics of the same name and text, you might want to delete the other one so it won't ...

Hello there, Turntable Jack! Welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter/D/Dem/Demi/Meter. What genre is your novel? There is a Novelists usergroup, you might want to join it for tips and talking with ...

Hi there, LRabbit, and welcome to YWS! Like Sam, I was sucked up to the story. The title is slightly boring (no offense!), but maybe that's only the working title? ...

Hello, 1der! The structure was random, it didn't connect in any pieces. There were long lines, short lines, stanzas of four, no stanzas at all. It's all a bit of ...

Hey, sday! I'm having a little hard time connecting those stanzas. The first and the third, okay, but what about that second one? To me, it's just in completely different ...

Hello! Just so you know, I know quite a little about sonnets and have never written any myself, so I don't know how good I am to review one. You ...

Okay, hello! I can see that this poem is written very passionately, but I'd suggest you don't use those bolds and italics etc. This won't be lacking any emotion even ...

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SishBee, you're wrong. Alex?

Hello there and welcome! Aww, fank you! That's what my little brother always says! He never pronounces the "th". :) Interesting, eh? I'm Demeter-slash-D-slash-Dem-slash-Meter-parenthesis-Metre-parenth

Hellos from rainy, gray, summer-y (as if) Finland! I always spell that wrong. Always. At first, I spell it "Finalnd" which is so irritating! [/irrelevant info] So. Welcome to YWS, ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! My name is (not really) Demeter and I agree with you, we're much friendlier than those people in that place. I don't know who and what ...

Hey there! What fun to have real veterans around! (I'm sorry, I didn't mean any offense. :)) YWS is probably loads different from the original TYWC, but I hope that's ...

Hi there, Charlie! Welcome to YWS! I go by Demeter, which is quite obvious, I think. Some people call me also D, Dem, or Meter. Sometimes even Metre. :D You've ...

... Wow. That was... different. It was a little weird and left me frowning, but that's the main reason I liked it. So you have left the i uncapitalized on ...