Demeter

Hi, Sarah! Here I am again :) This was actually a rather good chapter, I didn't spot any major mistakes. Your description thing has gotten better, so that's better. By ...

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Hey Tusker! How's it going? This sure is an amazing site, isn't it? :D How have you liked it so far? Oh, what a bunch of questions... Casey has already ...

Welcome, Patch! Sure it's alright just to review plot – and I'm glad you actually asked that, because it shows you're interested in reviewing. :) And that's considered a really ...

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4/10

Short and simple. 9/10.

Hey :) Hmm. I felt like the poem left me a little confused. Or, at least the first stanza; how it connects with the others and all. There's something in ...

Hi, Jared! I'm sure you want me and everyone else to be honest, so I just have to say this wasn't the most amazing poem ever. Personally, I prefer your ...

Hey, Alainna! I'm so glad Lyla's back in the business :) Thanks for informing me! to the boy sat across the room from me I think it's, "the boy who ...

Hey! Thanks for letting me know about the new chapter :) Oh nooo! This is getting really freaky. Luckily, it's 2 pm and the sun is shining, otherwise I couldn't ...

Oh, how beautiful! Really, I liked this very much, even though it was such a short piece. There is a little melancholic atmosphere and pretty imagery, which I like much. ...

Hi SFB and welcome to YWS! :) I think this poem was rather good! I'm not sure whether or not to be annoyed by the constant repetition of "Enter the ...

Hey, dailystatic! First of all, I just got to say that you're supposed to do two or more reviews before posting any of your own work. That is just because ...

Hi! You've got a nice idea here, and some good lines, too, but I felt that this piece lacked the wittiness of rhymes and like the ability of surprising the ...