Demeter

Not exactly – come on, I'm in YWS! How could I be bored? ;) The user below me is stressing over Christmas presents.

Hey, Sarah! This was generally a very good chapter! They don't belong here. The parts in italics are supposed to be her thoughts, right? Well, in that case I believe ...

Hey. She's being followed. Somehow this isn't strong enough for me. "Someone is following her" would maybe sound better, but I'm not sure. Actually, my suggestion is more awkward than ...

Woah. It's quite depressing to know it's based on a true story – your story, I suppose, the same name and all. I almost wouldn't like to keep reading, I ...

Hey, Sarah! Her gaze sought something in the distance. Her gaunt, honey-coloured fingers clasped the leash. All's fine, but both sentences start with "her", thus making it sound awkward. Same ...

Eh. 4/10.

Banned for taking it up on me.

Uh... not really, thanks. The user below me has a crush on me. Omigosh, Chirantha! You did NOT say that! Pretty desperate, huh? :lol: The user below me is NaNoing.

Banned for moving.

8/10. See, I broke my 9-/10 habit!

8/10. See, I broke my 9-/10 habit!

Hi! Happiness is a fleeting shadow, Trying to dull the pain of everyday life, but unable to cover up the vast quantities of pain and anguish that seems to envelope ...

Hahahahahahahaha! *looks around* It wasn't me!

Go Finland, go Finland!

Awww, I've got tattled. Thanks! I tattle on Dreamer (Not Me!), she's just so easygoing, and her wallet is really beautiful. So is Chirantha's, so I'm going to tattle him, ...