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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 9

    Hi! Oh, what a breathtakingly pretty chapter. bewildered. evanescing spraying the sky It's a little disturbing to read the same words again and again. I mean, "evanescing" is a beautiful ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 8

    Oh, Sarah, this wasn't a disgrace! Don't be so modest, this was good! Sarah is more bewildered than anything else as she watches the door slowly creak open as Marian ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 7

    Wow! The beginning was really dramatic, good job. You sure know how to keep your readers interested. The whole bold-italics thing was a little hard to follow, but I think ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 6

    A large, crooked Victorian house; three stories high with a sad jagged lawn outside the gazebo porch. Hastily up the wide marble stairs, footsteps echoing, echoing, echoing. Nice start! I've ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 5

    Hi. Don't worry about the length – for me, it's good if the chapter is short, especially if I have to read in computer. ;) Ooh, something's happening! She clothes ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Leapy, Sureal, Angel – you're all awesome.

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Report a good member!

    Eimear deserves to be tattled, too – she's helped me a lot in the beginning and also reviewed almost everything I've posted here. Dreamer, there's much more to you than ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Hi, Rhode! I like your username. How are you? Well, tell us something about yourself. What do you write/read/eat/drink/see/hear/enjoy? It's your thread, after all, so don't hesitate to fill it ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Hi and welcome, Ava! You've already been informed about the rules, so I won't do it now. How are you? Isn't YWS like the coolest online place ever? I like ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Who prank-called Snoink? XD

    JFW!!! Busted.

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Favourite and Least Favourite Words!

    I have too many favourites, but I can tell you some of them. Favourite: ophlthalmologist, Massachusetts, nostalgia, dislike... Least favourite: giggle Favourite Finnish word: lentotukikohta [air base]

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Who prank-called Snoink? XD

    You give me your number, I prank-call you again.

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: The User Below You...

    Well, not really, I just woke up. The user below me is humming something.

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    6.5/10... I think I'd appreciate it more if I'd seen The Notebook. :)

    Nov 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 4

    Yeay, Oz references. =) I can't help it, but I'm always having a little melancholic feeling while reading this. I don't know whether this would touch me as much if ...

    Nov 23, 2008


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