Demeter

Hi Sarah! 1. Dresser At night I lay them out, Nice and sweet opening line, I like it! each ribbon touched by so many thumbs, I imagine myself in one, ...

Okay, I'll tell you my middle name, it's Mirjam. :) Time to start guessing my second middle name! :D It both starts and ends with an I, and has six ...

Hello U and welcome to YWS! Haha, I'm completely too lazy to type out your whole name :D Hopefully you'll love this place! PM me anytime, if you need a ...

Hi, Sarah! We draw thick outlines, This line is not strong enough to be an opening one. And who is "we"? Maybe plain "drawing" would do the job – though ...

Aww, Sheik, good luck!

Yola! Welcome aboard! What's up? YWS is a great place, nice to have you here. :) PM me on anything anytime! See you around and have fun! Demeter xxx

Alex! Welcome! Ooh, great, another Aussie. Australia's great. I'd like to go there sometimes. Anyways, good to have you here. If you need a review or anything, just PM me. ...

Hey heyyy! Welcome to YWS! Nice to meet you. I'm Demeter [/stating the obvious] Well, you know what do, read the rules, be nice and so on. What do you ...

Haha :D

Kia! How are you? Welcome to YWS, hopefully you'll like it :D Well, I have a strong feeling you will! Well, first of all I recommend you to read the ...

Hi, Adna! Hopefully you have time to review one of my poems: Thanks very much! And don't stress about it if you're too busy. :) Demeter xxx

Hi! Would you review my poem, A cul de sac? Here it is: Thanks in advance! :) Demeter xxx

Hey hi hello, niteowl! :D Two little girls [Plain words may they be, but still they made a fine beginning. were once best friends, [I'm not very into this line ...

Welcome, WV! I'm so glad you like YWS already :) Good luck with posting your work!

Where could we go now? I don't think this solar system is a safe place anymore...