Demeter

All done. No line... *nudge nudge*

Moi, Anssi! Taas! :D Ilani, how could the king choose a failure like that? To make the meaning clearer, I suggest you replace the comma with a dash. the hallways ...

I'm pretty sure you mean Purp vs Blue lll, Princess ;)

Ha, Heather, you're gorgeous. Holly, love the smile! And Monki, how cute. xxx

Third time lucky, right? Duh-duh-duh-duh-d-d-d-d-duel! *embraces the word* 4. 4 is the magic number. Congrats, cyan.

It can be hard to place all those commas and periods in the dialogue bits. At the same time, you need to think of capitalization. When to capitalize and when ...

Moi, Anssi! He coughed weakly and turned towards the golden double doors that opened as his secret police force’s leader . Aram- A shur strode in. Aram [s]knelled[/s] before the ...

Nah, I don't think June's harsh. She's friendly. :)

Congrats! I'm happy for you! :)

Hey Kirsten 8) Here I am as you requested. Yay, thank heavens Lauren took care of those punctuation-with-dialogue parts! I thought it would be so annoying to point those out ...

Hello, Galerius. Finally here, as you wanted, sorry for the longish wait. I won't bore you with saying everything that other people ave already said, so I try to think ...

Hi, asxz! Sorry for the wait. Once I reached the top, I raced back through the corridors that I knew as well as the back of my hand. It was ...

Hello, Calvin. Prepare to be attacked with greets. Haha. Welcome to YWS! I believe you're LilyJamey's friend? Nice to meet you! She just told us you joined, and we all ...

Of course! I have still asxz's number three and Galerius' to do, and I'll be away the whole day, but I'll get to them soon!

Dream Deep, you remind me of Tilda Swinton! You're very pretty :)