Demeter

Hey Wish! Let's see here. When I was reading this poem, there were bits that felt a little out of place, and I think it's because you have different rhyme ...

Lauren, you're so pretty!

WIN, DUDE.

ZOMG LOOSE IS PRETTY ZOMGZOMG *DIES* Hey, wait a minute...

Hmm... I have a feeling. :P 6/10.

Haha, I haven't done this in ages. Hmm... The eye is a bit scary. 5/10.

Hi guys – There is already one thread similar to this: :)

:P

He truly was (is?) a legend.

Hi, Hannah. tears bubble out between the earth I got a feeling that "bubble out" was slightly too dramatic for this. You know, it was a bit like "fairiesponiespinkcupcakesmagicDEATHglitterflowersroses

Hi, Shina. Here is the review I promised and forgot about... *shifty eyes* Sorry for the wait! The sky was on fire. Hidden behind thousands of dancing clouds was the ...

Hi, Blinky. Rows of red patterned in with the sun I have to say, I like what you had before: "Red in the sky was striped with the sun", because ...

:/ I don't know what to think. :P 5/10.

Wow, Inc, your writing is beautiful.

Heh. Here's a bunch of my Disney drawings from the years 2006 to 2008. I tried putting them in a kind of age order, the first being the oldest, but ...