Demeter

I was afraid what I was about to see, but it turned out pretty nice. :P

We'll miss you too.

:shock:

You are so beautiful.

Hi, Piepie! I saw this had no reviews yet, so I wanted to give it a try. :) What can wash away shadows grip? Am I left to die in ...

Hi! So, Alohajuice, I really like what you did here. The rhyming works well, and it doesn't sound forced, which is the most important thing. The poem also stayed in ...

Hi, Jon! (I'm still taken aback by your name change, but I'll cope somehow. ;)) So, this poem was very intriguing in a way, and that's because it has things ...

Hiya, Swanton! I liked how you brought up the contrast between girliness and tomboyness, and the poem is light and fun to read. However, even though I like rhyming poems, ...

Hi there, Confusion! You certainly have an interesting piece here, and I must admit I quite liked it! I'm not too familiar with this kind of line breaks, but what ...

You have them on! You have them on! And they look a bit wobbly but never mind! Yay!

Hi there, Awake! I saw this had no reviews yet so I decided to drop in :) My heart races and pounds in my ears I reel my heavy breath ...

Good job! :D

I love you all. :D

Happy birthday, June, and everybody else who shares her birthday day :D Like Fortuna! Demeter xxx

Congrats, girls!