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  • Lyrics Re: Bliss

    Heya Vera. I liked the Bliss aspect you had going on here. The chorus was more difficult for me to grasp than the verses; it seemed a bit like you ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Unlove Letters ♥

    Hi Mandeyy! At first I want to say that the reason you haven't received more reviews is most likely the tiny font that few people will want to read. I ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Shuffle That Playlist!

    I can't really rate your list, because I don't know any of the artists. :P 1. Tuonelan Joutsen - Jean Sibelius 2. You've Got A Friend In Me - from ...

    Oct 20, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    "No." I tell that to Mom right away. OR If you're a sensitive person, put this book down, because [insert the main character's name] dies in the end.

    Oct 17, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    That's a raspberry juice carton I'm holding :P Edit: The big text is Finnish and the smaller text under it is Swedish, in case someone was wondering.

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: The Helium Balloon

    Ah, I heard about this too. It's a good thing that he was found, but it was very weird hearing about this right after coming back from seeing the Pixar ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Memoirs of a Teenage Wallflower

    Hey, Zephy! So, the first piece of a novel, eh? I'll be interested to find out what will happen in the future, since this one seemed to be dedicated to ...

    Oct 13, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Help me out here...

    Is it this one? I haven't read it, but it's amazing what a little googling can do :P

    Oct 10, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stargazer

    Please don't bump old threads. *locked*

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten.

    Hey Roon! Here I am as you requested. You had some great things going on in this poem. I especially liked the images that I like to call "meticulous," the ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey everybody

    Hi David! Welcome to YWS! This is a great place to get some good feedback, to just hang around, and to make friends, so I hope you'll find this place ...

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: If I Left, Would You Right?

    Hi, Kobain! I haven't read many lyrics on here, but I've seen enough to say that this is one of my favourites so far. I'd love to hear it with ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: :: Rain ::

    Hi, Aianarie! I was pleasantly surprised when I stumbled across this what I thought was a random work, when I saw it was a sonnet. I've recently taken interest in ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Evi -- you're very very pretty. Lily -- rather scary. :P Stella -- Which one is you?

    Oct 5, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings YWS

    I am great, thanks for asking! How about yourself?

    Oct 4, 2009


In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
— Robert Frost