Demeter

This made my day.

*moved from the Lounge* Hi, Lily, and welcome to YWS! Do you have any specific questions about how the site works? As for the language problem, I can really relate. ...

Wow.

xD Ster in the end.

Done!

Hey, Gun – here by request, even though this is quite an old thread... =P Let me nit-pick first. Tell me what you want to grow up and be? A ...

Both done!

Hey, Pudin! Here by request! She felt awkward, a little out of place and unconscious Technically, in this case, awkward and out of place mean the same thing, so I'd ...

Hey, Aqua! Here I am as you requested, and earlier that I said I would be =) This is very descriptive piece, and I'd give full marks for you if ...

*bump*

Hello, Shadow! I stare up At the world of color, It's warm softness Kissing my cheek. Hm, what exactly is warm softness? What does it feel like, other than warm ...

That's everything I've got. :P

Great job!

Hi, Mizz! This is such a feel-good poem. I liked the colour aspect – however, I don't know if its your problem or mine, but when you say blue, I ...

Hey, Janay! First of all, I think it's great how you've also thought about the music. I can't compose music to save my life, so it's admirable how some people ...