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Demeter

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Lifespan Of A Butterfly

    Hi Jas! Wow – I really enjoyed this piece, I'll say it straight away. You had one of the best opening sentences I have read in a long time; it's ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie :S

    Hello Laura! (I hope I can call you that, because I won't like typing your username every time :D!) Welcome to YWS, it's great to have you here. Did you ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie! "/

    Hi Kayla! Woo, Scotland! I love Scotland! I was there this summer (I mean, last summer...) and I had a lovely time. I definitely want to go back there sometimes. ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm new.

    Yay Vulpix! Welcome! I used to love the first season of Pokèmon! Too bad they don't show it anymore, at least here. My favourite was always Pikachu. Happy New Year, ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings

    Hey Jianfre! You have an interesting name. Welcome to YWS! Happy New Year to you too! Did you do anything special? Well, if you need anything (e.g. have a question ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Happy New Years, Fellow Writers!

    Happy New Year!

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: A cool job for 18+ YWSers (US only)

    However, you have to be at least 18 years old and live in the United States. Sounds like the perfect job for me!

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Your 2010 Resolutions!

    Write more Review more Drink more water Start revising for exams in time Get a temporary summer job Be more punctual Keep my room clean Go to America Keep being ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Please gold star works you like!

    Will do! I often forget about this, but I'll try to remember!

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Big Changes for 2010 (input needed!)

    I'll be fine with anything that will be decided in the end. I don't want to offend anyone, but it's just a part of your internet lives and therefore I ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Oh, by the way...

    I do! Now hug me.

    Dec 30, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Momma

    Hi, Chelsea! :) I have to say that I really like this. It may not be what I would usually call a story, you know, with action and conflict and ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Split Personality

    Hi Mage! The subject you have is interesting and you could get so much more out of it if you went beyond your ordinary, day-to-day observations! What I feel is ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Black Wolf (Chapt. 1 / Part 1)

    Heya Ash, I saw this had no reviews yet so I decided to drop by! Your writing is quite easy and smooth to read and I didn't find any noticeable ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Helllo =)

    'Lo Corwin, welcome to YWS! Do you like Canada? It sounds cool. Actually, I think I've been there once. I was at the Niagara Falls with my family ten-ish years ...

    Dec 29, 2009


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson