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Demeter

  • Art & Photography Re: Chupacabra

    No! Goats are not to be eaten! D: Hi, Rayne! The Chupacabra is so cute. I especially love the face and the head – it makes me think of Pacman ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: art work

    Hey, Maki! The lightning thing looks cool, but I think that the background and the character could look more like they're in the same picture, and not the like the ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Randomness

    Hi, Witch! :D Now, I've never used Photoshop and I don't know what a tablet is and what you can do with it, so I'll just tell you my general ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: scrabble

    Hey, Dark! It's kind of cute, haha. It should be way bigger though! The photo could perhaps be taken from a different angle, too, because right now the most important ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Ben & Beth-Prologue

    Hello, Kate! Since this is so short, I'll go to the nit-picks straight away. while I was blissfully unaware sleeping in my bed. In my opinion, this would sound better ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angel without her wings part 1 (gory...)

    Hello Sacrifice. There were small droplets of sweat on his forehead and when he turned round he had a strange birthmark on his shoulder You can scratch the word "small", ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]

    Kamas! It's an elephant! And such a lovely one. I admire the shading (although some of the lines can be seen), and the trunk, and the wise eyes. :D What ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My main character drawing...Maya

    Hey Fox, I like it! I'm not a big fan of this kind of drawing style – it's a bit manga-ish, no? – but this picture looks nice. I don't ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Mary

    Hi Classy! I like her expression; especially the eyes look very nice. However, the mouth is probably too close to the nose, because it looks a little bit like she's ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie said hi

    Hi TJ! Age is just a number! There are some very talented young people here, so don't look down on yourself just because you're 14. :) Anyway, welcome to YWS! ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Say

    So, JD. I don't think I've read anything by you before – or have I? First of all, I'm glad there's a story behind this story. Of course, it's unfortunate ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Is it real

    Hello, TJ. It's difficult to write very short poems like this, because then you will have to pay even more attention to making everything count. I'm finding it a little ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The "I'm Back" Thread

    Wow, great to see you back, everyone!

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Written

    Oh em gee what's /this/? I really hope no one has reviewed this while I've been writing this, I want to have it first. xD Not that I have much ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Photography test at Home- First Ever

    Hi Sam! I don't know much about photography, but I thought I'd take a look anyway. :) I prefer the key/shoe/envelope pictures in black and white – some of those ...

    Jan 7, 2010


I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway.
— Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)