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Re: Chupacabra
No! Goats are not to be eaten! D: Hi, Rayne! The Chupacabra is so cute. I especially love the face and the head – it makes me think of Pacman ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: art work
Hey, Maki! The lightning thing looks cool, but I think that the background and the character could look more like they're in the same picture, and not the like the ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Randomness
Hi, Witch! :D Now, I've never used Photoshop and I don't know what a tablet is and what you can do with it, so I'll just tell you my general ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: scrabble
Hey, Dark! It's kind of cute, haha. It should be way bigger though! The photo could perhaps be taken from a different angle, too, because right now the most important ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Ben & Beth-Prologue
Hello, Kate! Since this is so short, I'll go to the nit-picks straight away. while I was blissfully unaware sleeping in my bed. In my opinion, this would sound better ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Angel without her wings part 1 (gory...)
Hello Sacrifice. There were small droplets of sweat on his forehead and when he turned round he had a strange birthmark on his shoulder You can scratch the word "small", ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]
Kamas! It's an elephant! And such a lovely one. I admire the shading (although some of the lines can be seen), and the trunk, and the wise eyes. :D What ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: My main character drawing...Maya
Hey Fox, I like it! I'm not a big fan of this kind of drawing style – it's a bit manga-ish, no? – but this picture looks nice. I don't ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Mary
Hi Classy! I like her expression; especially the eyes look very nice. However, the mouth is probably too close to the nose, because it looks a little bit like she's ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Newbie said hi
Hi TJ! Age is just a number! There are some very talented young people here, so don't look down on yourself just because you're 14. :) Anyway, welcome to YWS! ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Say
So, JD. I don't think I've read anything by you before – or have I? First of all, I'm glad there's a story behind this story. Of course, it's unfortunate ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Is it real
Hello, TJ. It's difficult to write very short poems like this, because then you will have to pay even more attention to making everything count. I'm finding it a little ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Wow, great to see you back, everyone!
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Written
Oh em gee what's /this/? I really hope no one has reviewed this while I've been writing this, I want to have it first. xD Not that I have much ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Photography test at Home- First Ever
Hi Sam! I don't know much about photography, but I thought I'd take a look anyway. :) I prefer the key/shoe/envelope pictures in black and white – some of those ...
Jan 7, 2010
