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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bedouin Song

    Hey, Kamas! Wow. I really enjoyed this poem. I could picture everything very clearly, and I absolutely loved the vocabulary you used here -- I also learnt a few new ...

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Suffering

    Hey there, Lydia! I have to agree with Kat - while the full stops keeps the poem's rhythm up, they make it sound choppy and like there's no room for ...

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Use Nebbish In A Random Sentence

    "Why am I always used as an example? Take F.R.E.D., for example – he's much more of a nebbish than I am!" exclaimed Mark.

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Good Little Guy

    Hi, Ella! There were many details in this song that I liked. The overall impression left me a bit unfulfilled, though – I felt like there were several things that ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: January 2010 Could Set a Reviewing Record...

    I just did my 500th review! :D

    Jan 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: gregor's peas

    Hey, Kylan! This poem in general makes me happy, especially the ending. It's still not my favourite one by you, even though the quality's you through and through and you ...

    Jan 15, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Parrots.

    Hey Lava! Overall, very nice job -- especially if you drew them without looking at a picture of a parrot. I don't know whether or not you did, but it's ...

    Jan 15, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Changes January 14, 2010 (Stats and Maps)

    This is so cool. Although the map lies about me. But it's okay!

    Jan 15, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The Desert Island Post

    1. Kylan 2. beckiw, or Matt Bellamy, or Nate 3. Aedomir 4. Blink 5. Adnamarine, or Stella Thomas, or JabberHut Book: The Catcher in the Rye CD: The 4-disc ABBA ...

    Jan 14, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Devolved Knowledge Base

    It looks very nice!

    Jan 14, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]

    I want more!

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Writing Tutorials Re: Writing Good Dialogue

    This is a great article and I will definitely try to learn from this :D

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Little Church Upon the hill

    Hi Kat! This is a nice picture, but it does look too much like something you could snap on a weekend trip. I don't know, the title made me expect ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]

    Kamas (again)! :0 the converse picture. I adore it. Did you start it from scratch? I mean, without a photo to help you or to draw on? In that case, ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: A Softer World

    Hello, Music! I don't know much about photography -- but these photos were great and you seem like a talented photographer. I had some favourites and ones I didn't like ...

    Jan 12, 2010


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— dissonance