Demeter

Hey, Jame! Freedom for the free of mind; doorways of the rhyme. Ebbing seas of memory beneath a violent gust of lust, Both of the lines in bold disturb the ...

Hi Kayla! The beginning was possibly my favourite bit in this poem, although maybe it was the repetition that made it seem like lacking something. Also, I couldn't help thinking ...

Done!

Hey there, Anzius -- here by request, even though this is a bit old! Also, sorry for making you wait. So, I liked how you managed to have me overall ...

Bugwhisker! Hi! I hope you'll enjoy your time here in YWS! In fact, you better! :D And just contact me if you have any questions! Exclamation mark! Demeter x

Hello! I would love it if my surname was as interesting as yours! I imagine you've heard of thousands of lame Valentine's Day jokes, so I won't be making any ...

Hey, Rune! Welcome back! Sorry to hear about your email, hopefully you've got it sorted out. See you around!

Hey, Topie! The rhymes and the rhythm in this poem work overall very well. Rhyming poetry has the certain sort of togetherness that I like but find quite difficult to ...

Hey, NaRachel! First of all, it would be nice if you pointed out the choruses, verses, bridges and other parts of the song. I'm pretty sure what the chorus is, ...

That sounds great! Now I wish I'd done more, though. :D

Hey Aries! I'm a Sagittarius! And I'm welcoming you to YWS! What's your favourite book? I haven't read that one you're reading now, what is it about? Anyway! I hope ...

Hey Philip! Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll find your stay here very pleasant. :) See you around! Demeter x

Hey, Howler! Well, I quite liked the extraordinary point of view, and I'm glad you were given that prompt. The biggest problems I had with this were the occasionally uneven ...

Hi, Greyed! I've always liked clocks and ticking as images. It reminds me of Poe for some reason. Some of the longer lines you have there break the rhythm and ...