Demeter

Anzius! It's been somewhat forever, has it not? I felt like this song was a bit all over the place. It probably works alright, given the theme of the song, ...

Hi Halycon! Here by request! So what I think is that this poem got better toward the end. The beginning stanza was a little... boring, even, because even though it ...

Brilliant!

Hey Stori, finally here. So, I actually prefer this to the one I originally read and whose review YWS ate after I had finished it. This one was more interesting, ...

Will the profits only go to YWS if the purchaser is in the USA/UK? I really don't know anything about this stuff, haha.

Hi Bubble! So one thing that stood out for me in this prologue was the amount of telling you did. Instead of showing the reader how a character makes their ...

I unlocked it and took the liberty of moving it to Fantasy fiction, since you said it had a lot of fantasy elements. Just contact me or another mod if ...

What genre do you write, and why? I write a lot of poetry. I've also written some "realistic" fiction, and recently I've had the urge to write something more fantastical. ...

Well. I have blue eyes, and I always wanted to have brown eyes. It might be because here where I live, pretty much everyone has blue eyes, apart from those ...

This is such an amazing thing! The Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats by T. S. Eliot Girl, Interrupted by Susanna Kaysen The Book of Questions by Pablo Neruda

Blinky! At last you have something new. I would've got to this sooner, but you know, Freud was holding me hostage. So, I read this poem a few times, and ...

Change one letter of the previous poster's word to get a new one! The starting word, alias the last word in volume 1, is: Frag

I like the chat no matter what it looks like. I love the nostalgia, though. (= the old chat) [=/= the current chat] As long as Jabizzle doesn't ban me ...

Hey, Hippie! In haikus, rhyming isn't really used. This of course doesn't mean that you couldn't use it, but haikus being really short poems, rhymes can be too much. The ...

Hi, Valentine, here as you requested. Now, obviously I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll just say whatever came to my mind when I was reading this. This really ...