Demeter

Hi, Sura! Sorry for not getting back to you earlier. When the blackest bile precedes your being a wicked call comes hence singing I like the opening line. "Precede" is ...

Hi, Amnien! Thanks for posting on my thread, and sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I think it's a crime that us orphans still have to go to ...

Hmm, is there something wrong with the Admin Control Panel link? Two of them, a red one and a blue one, show up for me in the bottom of the ...

April 1st - Rom 3:12 our shadows colour the graveyard and, as we inch closer, the walls who are already frowning upon us – or so it seems in the ...

Expect to see something here. Demeter x

Many, many times. Both in Finnish and English. Mostly in English, though. So don't worry! :P

I'd like to be a book translator. That way I could combine my two loves: literature and languages! Other options would be a journalist, or a psycho-therapist.

Scarlett, you look like someone I know. And everyone looks great! This is me today! With my candy cane earrings that you probably can't see!

Hi Brooke! Yay for discovering writing! It is one of the best hobbies that I know ;) I hope you've liked YWS so far and will stay for a long ...

You're welcome! I do poetry and occasionally some fiction too, usually "realistic" fiction.

Hi, Chris! Welcome to YWS! I love J. D. Salinger; The Catcher in the Rye is my favourite book! And I also love pasta. :) I hope you enjoy your ...

naponaponapo

Well, technically a work is never ready, and never perfect. There's always stuff you want to change, but in places like YWS, the point for most people is to post ...

Hi, Arris! I also prefer this one to the first one! In fact, I quite liked this! I sort of kind of loved the little rhyming thing you had going ...

Hi, Arris! You have quite a lot of repetition here -- I think that "the dust dawn morning" works well in both the beginning and ending keeping the poem together, ...