Demeter

Hi, Navita! First off, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you have found your way here and are taking part in NaPoWriMo! Some of your poems had sort of a list-like ...

Hi, Clo! This was a compact entity and I quite liked it. One of my favourite parts was "staccato heartbeats that pinball between/glass ribs and a loose screw-on lid". One ...

It looks so good! Thank you!

April 5th - long time, no see for the first time in years, I went to the grove that's just a rock's throw away, it's odd how I meet up ...

April 4th - liability truth is said to outweigh lies but what if you have a kilogram of both? this time every year they sow guiles that grow into an ...

(Thank you muchly for your comments, Kylan and Jasmine! :)) April 3rd - miss world she never smiled for the camera, but she always did her homework. she was the ...

Hi Jas! In the first stanza of the first poem, the description was very pretty. It felt going on and on, though, and I was waiting for something happen throughout ...

Hi, Nevey! Wow, Egypt, that's so cool. Have you ever heard The Bangles song "Walk Like an Egyptian"? I like it. And now it's stuck in my head. Can't say ...

Jasmine! I like your name very much indeed. Probably because Aladdin might be the best Disney movie after Lion King. Welcome aboard, and drop me a PM anytime! See you ...

10. Finland *pets* And who is at the Kola Peninsula? That's quite amazing.

Done! :D

(Thank you, Hannah!) April 2nd - venerdì santo the new neighbours have only just unloaded their black escalade and they sit on the porch with cigars ready at hand their ...

Hi, Jemjive! First of all, you can safely scratch the disclaimer in the beginning. Don't want to make it too easy for the readers, eh? :P I quite like the ...

fading-dream >> Scroll down for the list of contents. People were allowed to submit their work in around January 2009, and all the included ones have been chosen out of ...

Hi, Bubblegum! Here I am :) Somehow I have to say that I liked the emotionless, matter-of-fact narration. It goes well along with the fact that the narrator has lost ...