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Demeter

Demeter

  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day July 2010 Check-In Thread

    I've done... three?

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Jodie’s House

    Hey Mattoo! At some places, the choppy sentences fitted perfectly. At some, however, they became annoying. I think that with everything, less is more, therefore also with the short sentences. ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Tower Girls- 1

    Hey, Stella! First off, this was very entertaining. I didn't think the humour was forced at all; everything seemed something that should be expected from you anyway. I kept sniggering ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Snowflakes from Erebus

    Hi Gal! Well, this is again one of those works that make me do a double-take when reading, but I guess it serves me right for naming myself something that ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: We need your writing ...

    If you insist.

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: haiku for the shipwrecked

    Here is the key to part II. I will eternally respect anyone who takes the time to decode it by themselves, but I know it might be a royal pain, ...

    Jul 24, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    I already posted this one, but who cares. :P It's Kylan and me! And this is me... in a tree. In Carmel-by-the-sea. That rhymed.

    Jul 24, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day July 2010 Check-In Thread

    I don't dare say a goal. But I will contribute.

    Jul 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Latitude, Longitude and Four Dimensions

    Hi, Navita! Sorry you've had to wait for this long! (I feel like I've said that in every review I've made recently...) You've gotten such wonderful reviews already, most of ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: How would you pronounce this name?

    My (rhymes with sky) - len (something like "lynn").

    Jul 8, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Various Small Updates (Week of July 5, 2010)

    From now on though, only the latest blog entry from that user will show up. This is great, thanks. :)

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Plato's Cave

    For Blinky's contest. (Link at the bottom.) * they were born into rusty necklaces and stone floor kissing their soles and before their very eyes, where pupils had long overthrown ...

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Et tu, Brute?

    Hello, Eme! Welcome to the YWS :D What do you like to write? Demeter x

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The July 2010 Newsletter: Did you like it?

    Yes, I liked it very much. I was especially interested by the contests, even though I'm not allowed to take part in most of them.

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Questions and Answers Re: Storybooker Badge?

    The only way to get the badge is to be nominated enough times after which a mod gives you the badge –– or, occasionally if the mod feels like the ...

    Jul 7, 2010


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