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Re: Chapter 1 - Giving Up Is Liberating
That was, interesting. Interesting in a good way though. I like it and it's pretty cool. Also, I LOVE your choice of words throughout this chapter. For example, excellent choice ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Don't Be Afraid To Be Who You Are (Chapter 1) *EDITED*
Hi! There's a couple things that I would change. 1. I would change the word "at" to "in" in the beginning at, "walk to the shops at town". 2. I ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Not Her Fault
Really good! I liked it! There's just a few things I would change. Number 1: In the sentence, "'Ada!' I yelled back just as a the teacher, Ms. Fish gave ...
Jul 15, 2014