Delirium

Thankyou very much. And I considered the quotatins, but it represents more than one "I love you" and I felt it would stand out too much with it. But thankyou ...

Thankyou very much :) xx- Delirium

This is amazing...I wish I could write you a super amazing review but...I find nothing wrong. This piece is so relatable and touching. Great work, keep it up! xx- Delirium

Thankyou very much for the wonderful comments and critique. I must agree, I, myself find it distracting as well. I simply haven't found a decent way to present it yet. ...

Thankyou very much for the wonderful comments and critique. I must agree, I, myself find it distracting as well. I simply haven't found a decent way to present it yet. ...

Finally, something eye-opening :) I enjoyed this piece of yours so much because it is so blunt. So straight-forward; uncensored. I wish I could write you a great review but ...

Thankyou so much for the kind words. I had originally written it for a collection of children's poems for a book, but later decided to pull it because I felt ...

Making you wonder is the whole purpose, haha. "herself" is unnecessary, however I chose it to represent femininity within the subject matter. "shied" is referring to her hiding away or ...

Thankyou very much for the critique and suggestions. I will take this into account for the future. I'm glad you enjoyed it. xx- Delirium

Thankyou very much for your kind words. It inspires me to hear everyones thoughts on my work. I'm glad you enjoyed it. xx- Delirium

Thankyou so very much for this amazing review! I found myself smiling while reading it. I do try and strive for simplicity yet I enjoy the words rarely used. I ...

Yes, I did. I typed it up in Photoshop in the cool typewriter font because I liked the feel. The original resides in my moleskin. Thankyou very much for the ...

GreenTulip, Thankyou very much. The first stanza was also my favorite. I understand your frustration with the lack of punctuation. I have been told in the past that I use ...

I am not one for haikus, but I must say you have definitely caught me with this piece. The last line itself simply says so much. The simplicity of this ...