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Thank you EccentricRose! :) I will keep all of that in mind! :)

Thank you so much! I understand where you're coming from with more emotional description, but I was trying to incorporate my understanding of performers, although full of life and soul ...

Just you darling :P

That really is inspiring! You are so brave to write about your emotions like that, I'm in awe! :)

Oh my you'll make an emotional wreck of me yet, CatInTheShower. The very same to you my friend, and yes twas a lovely dream I'd say :P However, I think ...

Thank you so much! And yes I'm the exact same, it will be lengthened!! Don't worry about the review repetition, it just means I get to see your lovely comments ...

Thank you very much! Yes ballet was along my train of thought, but as you mentioned further on, I like writing things that can be interpreted differently by each reader. ...

Hi again, I'm slowly making my way through chapters, and as I do, it's getting better! I have to say, I just love this story, and it's hardly even begun, ...

Thank you so much Eros, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Oh guys! Sorry CatInTheShower is very sarcastic, and that is unfortunately an example of his attempt at humour :P but thank you so much for your comments! :)

Oh no not all the dialogue, just a few parts! I just thought some of them came across less serious than I imagine the Olympians to be. E.g. I liked ...

Dear CatInTheShower, On revision, This piece lacks the certain style, finesse and all round character of your first piece. Viva La Resistance! I felt your first had more weight and ...

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I know, and your ego seems big enough already...not that I'd know it DEFINITELY is or anything...:P