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I liked this poem but one thing that I really noticed and was evident was the rhyme scheme and meter. You changed up the rhyme scheme quite a few times, ...

Wow. I honestly think this is a very good poem. Your emotions are so visible through this poem and the feeling is powerful. It makes perfect sense and I like ...

Hehe, wow, I actually thought I was a pree good writer, but there is always things I can learn. Kind of forgot about that. I guess I better edit all ...

Hey Rose :) I liked this poem and the points you included in it. I liked the part about all the different colors and things it protects. People often forget ...

I liked this poem. It was cute and I like how you got the poor coat talking about it's life. There's just a few grammatical errors I caught for you ...

I really like this poem because it speaks the truth. Too many kids are reverting to the exact same slang language forbidden on YWS. It pains me to find such ...

I really like this piece of poetry and it moved me. This seems like a really powerful piece of work but I'm not so sure about the last line. Perhaps ...

Thanks for the review. I realize the blowup emphasize placed on elven and fairy stories such as this one, and you're right about the prophecy. I just don't know how ...

~~1~~ ~~Entranced~~ It was a broiling morning for the people living in the Scottish Countryside; the heat had been relentless the past week. The tranquil green of the landscape seemed ...

I can give you some photos then if y'all wish ;) Yeah. So that's me, I guess :) PM because I have like no friends on here. Lonercentral, huzzah! ;)

Okay. So I have this idea which I think it's really good but I don't know if it appeals to the general crowd. I'd like to give you a plot ...

Wow. Congrats. I always am trying to get a good idea. The book series sounds very interesting. Could you give me a synospis on it? I couldn't help but notice ...

Well I'll be sure to check that out because I'm bursting with ideas that can't be tamed. Like Miley ;) Anyways, thanks and I'll check that out right now!

From what I've read, storybooking is basically roleplaying, but more detailed and informal?

Thanks so much :) This actually really helps me. I don't know whether this counts as a short story or not so I'll just put it under novel because I ...