DelanieHeart

Interesting. I like how the character kept emphasizing she didn't mean to go to Pandora; it was all a big mistake. Her curiosity is a very helpful tool you can ...

I enjoyed it, actually. Not a big fan of Aladdin although that's the school play we're doing this year. Anyways, enjoyed it and here's the big long review you've been ...

Hahaha, same :) Everybody on here is gorgy

I liked your review, since I never got to go see the movie, and I enjoyed it. It was more of a review on the movie than a persuasive review ...

Hey, I liked this poem. The reviewer before me did a pree good job on summming up the corrections so yeah, I really like it :) Keep pursuing poeming, even ...

This was a very nice piece of fiction. I could've did the whole big edit thing but I'm sure another reviewer got to you! I like the last line, about ...

That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire your black tongue, hints you’re a big, fat liar. That pale skin of yours, as solid as stones it’s a ...

Not precious at all -- but known to many, Then give me misery! Great poem, first of all and cute rhyme scheme :) I like the theme you added and ...

Hehe, I liked this poem. Short and Simple and Sweet. I like the idea of it, you know, going along with the rainbow. More and more poems are shying away ...

Heya, I could write about the grammatical errors and the parts where the words aren't transitioning right, but everybody has done that already for me :) Anyways, nice poem and ...

Ahahahahahaha, I read this and seriously laughed out loud. A poem about SpongeBob... I thought I'd seen it all when there was a poem about a rock but SpongeBob, that ...

This was a very interesting piece of fiction; usually they bore me to death but yours captivated my attention. I would write down all your grammatical errors but the reviewers ...

I liked this piece of fiction but the reviewers before me covered it pretty well. I think you should put a bit more dialogue into this piece because the few ...

name: Delanie Heart (oh yes, I went there :)) child number: 49 gender: Female age: 15 description/picture: Long brown hair, brown eyes, tall and busty likes: Reading and writing, dancing ...

Thanks. I'll get to editing :)