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  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Mary Jane: Trial by Fire 2

    The next morning Morlun and MJ arrived in Dresden comma Germany. The legend of Mephisto started here comma thus here is where the trial would start. Morlun and MJ checked ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Gettysburg Chapter 2

    “Rise and shine!” sang Gracie gently remove the gently. It sounds odd. as she poured half a glass of ice-cold water, fresh from the brook around the back of the ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 2)

    The dull, rhythmical thuds of his footsteps, mixed with the cries of men outside, swelled around Godfrey’s ears. Continuing his monotonous pace, he gazed at the door at the end ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Cutter's Fate

    Yeah. I portray more of her narrative story but I could create more stanzas as to why she is cutting or what she's feeling. I used to have problems with ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Cutter's Fate

    Thanks for the review, I guess I'll have to give it a good one-over tonight. As for the experience, I have lots, trust me. A poem is generally written for ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Cutter's Fate

    Meh, there's always those ones. Thanks for the review but I don't understand completely what you're talking about. The style of writing you like is different from mine; thanks for ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: NOTHING.

    Meh. I didn't like this.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Today I Am Negative

    Today I Am Negative Today I am negative And there's nothing I'd enjoy more Than my family not being positive I can hear them through my door Could you shut ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner

    Bree Tanner: The Tragic Ending The life of Bree Tanner So short, yet fulfilled A vampire whose fate Meant her getting killed Her life ended tragic Her life was so ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Cutter's Fate

    A Cutter's Fate There you are Smiling at me Behind a large wall Pain is hard to see Every new day It's a vice I need a relief My wrists ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: Saving Aleogra -- Need reviews on the idea.

    Hehe, no. Delanie is a human who saves the elves. I admit that this story planning could've used a lot more detail. I will be sure to make everything crystal ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Renaissance: A Postive Influence

    Thanks Mrs. ED ;) Love the review and I do use a lot of the same words in some paragraphs sadly. Glad you like it though and just to let ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Renaissance: A Postive Influence

    The Renaissance: Heroic Traits The Renaissance, to put it simply, was the rebirth of classical knowledge from the ancient civilizations of Greece and Rome. The Renaissance changed ideas drastically an

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Mary Jane: Trial by Fire

    I liked your story and I am excited to see where it goes. Here is the big long review you most likely were expecting. Your take on the characcters is ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Draco's first Murder!

    I liked your take on the story but you've really confused me. This isn't the Draco we know now or is porrtayed in the novels. He is whiny and Snape ...

    Mar 7, 2011


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