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Re: Mary Jane: Trial by Fire 2
The next morning Morlun and MJ arrived in Dresden comma Germany. The legend of Mephisto started here comma thus here is where the trial would start. Morlun and MJ checked ...
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Re: Gettysburg Chapter 2
“Rise and shine!” sang Gracie gently remove the gently. It sounds odd. as she poured half a glass of ice-cold water, fresh from the brook around the back of the ...
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Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 2)
The dull, rhythmical thuds of his footsteps, mixed with the cries of men outside, swelled around Godfrey’s ears. Continuing his monotonous pace, he gazed at the door at the end ...
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Re: A Cutter's Fate
Yeah. I portray more of her narrative story but I could create more stanzas as to why she is cutting or what she's feeling. I used to have problems with ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: A Cutter's Fate
Thanks for the review, I guess I'll have to give it a good one-over tonight. As for the experience, I have lots, trust me. A poem is generally written for ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: A Cutter's Fate
Meh, there's always those ones. Thanks for the review but I don't understand completely what you're talking about. The style of writing you like is different from mine; thanks for ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: NOTHING.
Meh. I didn't like this.
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Today I Am Negative
Today I Am Negative Today I am negative And there's nothing I'd enjoy more Than my family not being positive I can hear them through my door Could you shut ...
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Re: The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner
Bree Tanner: The Tragic Ending The life of Bree Tanner So short, yet fulfilled A vampire whose fate Meant her getting killed Her life ended tragic Her life was so ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: A Cutter's Fate
A Cutter's Fate There you are Smiling at me Behind a large wall Pain is hard to see Every new day It's a vice I need a relief My wrists ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Saving Aleogra -- Need reviews on the idea.
Hehe, no. Delanie is a human who saves the elves. I admit that this story planning could've used a lot more detail. I will be sure to make everything crystal ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: The Renaissance: A Postive Influence
Thanks Mrs. ED ;) Love the review and I do use a lot of the same words in some paragraphs sadly. Glad you like it though and just to let ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: The Renaissance: A Postive Influence
The Renaissance: Heroic Traits The Renaissance, to put it simply, was the rebirth of classical knowledge from the ancient civilizations of Greece and Rome. The Renaissance changed ideas drastically an
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Mary Jane: Trial by Fire
I liked your story and I am excited to see where it goes. Here is the big long review you most likely were expecting. Your take on the characcters is ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Draco's first Murder!
I liked your take on the story but you've really confused me. This isn't the Draco we know now or is porrtayed in the novels. He is whiny and Snape ...
Mar 7, 2011
