DelanieHeart

Okay, Unun! I finished those reviews. You're my best (and only) customer :) Completed: 1. Unun

Okay, no hard feelings, Unun, but you spelt "dieing" wrong. It's "dying"... Just pointing that out ;) My mother walks; eyes glazed Stuck behind invisible haze It seems like there ...

When the clock hits two I can tell you This line seems short compared to the first one... 250 babies breath their first 113 will starve and thirst I dunno ...

You are like the best reviewer ever! The one thing I dislike about your review is the fact I'll most likely have to work on this piece for a longer ...

He sits on the street, owns none but a guitar, The word "none" in here doesn't really fit. You're talking about material so perhaps change the word And a knapsack, ...

I seem just another girl This line flows awkward together and is slightly confusing wearing worn out jeans, having big dreams, living in my own world. I know I ain’t ...

You are the charmer The one who lures Innocent hearts into your trap Too loooong You know your way in You’ve got every map Don’t you love? You are deceitful ...

I’d like to be a star in the fallen sky, Watch the world change as time passes by. To be a burning bolt of eternal fire, Be the item of ...

Hand in his Warm, damp, and firm. Fingers curl. Lips upturn into a crooked smile. Blue birds sing, sun shines. Like any cliche fairytale of young exuberant romance, This seems ...

There's a black where there should be a beat, Take out the "a". There's a black what? Eating all my feelings, emotions... Causing me to stagger, stumble, and die, Feeling ...

Being pretty Doesn’t mean super skinny, Amen with a waist the size of a twig. Pretty isn’t about your skin tone, Racism is big in my school or what colour ...

My mind was empty, my soul as well, I could not find a tale to tell. Even my pen refused to write, None of my words were chosen right. This ...

Ohemgee, did you write this for me? I totally understand where you're coming from because math sucks. I mean, it rocks *rolls eyes* Anyways, I agree with Mrs. Elizabeth Darcy, ...

It only hurts them To say nothing of progress— Women’s suffrage! Civil rights! (corporate control, rising gas prices— Five dollars they say this May but what of it?) Always there, ...

This is a great poem! I love it :) There was nothing really I found that I would troll on except capitilzation and the likes but since you have no ...