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Thank you for your advice! Looking back, I do suppose that Castle comes across as almost childish in his efforts. I'll see if I can fix that.

Thank you! The second part is now up and ready for reading.

Hello there, I'm not normally a huge fan of the werewolf variant of horror stories, but you did a very good job with this. The title, The Beast Within, brings ...

My fellow reviewers made most of the points that I could hope to make, so I'll just add one more: I'm not sure that I understand the relationship between Agnus ...

Hello Hiadel, You said that this passage aimed more towards conveying "feeling" rather than "plot", and while you do hit that mark, I think that plot would help as well. ...