DefJam101

This is the beginning of the first chapter of a short story/novella I am trying to pen down. A while back I posted a much longer section of a story--which ...

I try to avoid antagonists, actually. I have "bad" characters in my story, but they are just "flawed" not evil. In fact, the "good" guys in my story seem like ...

*ahem* RESPECT TEH ELEPHONT!!!1!!11 Also, hi.

Excellent dialog O.o Didn't feel clunky at all.

:3 Also, hi.

Yah, I guess the big chapter is intimidating. Maybe next time I will include a short caption then say, "If you want to read the whole chapter click ." Or ...

I'm left wondering why I can't manage to get a single view?...

I'm no writing expert, but if there's anything I can really tell you is to not focus on one part of the characters. I.E. They talk, they move, they think, ...

EDIT: Gave it some 'spellcheckage. Hope this is in the right place. ---***--- READ THE FOLLOWING: "The Source" is a book I am writing on my own time, I have ...

Rgr that, can't get on LJ to repost it now, hah.

I prefer LOTR, mainly because I think Harry Potter's writing style is very shallow. Harry Potter is quick and easy to get into, however it's also very, well, dumb. It ...

1. I outline the main plot devices then just go along as I write. My story isn't going to have any essentially "good" and "evil" characters so outlining it is ...