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Whoa!! This was amazing!! I would've never guessed that in the end it was a basketball! The first time I read it, I was thinking This poor girl, this is ...

Twilight Before , [you need the comma there!!] I was alone In darkness and in doubt Until you showed me the way out Your shining face Revealed to me my ...

You always make me laugh. You never make me cry. Please don't let this be my last goodbye. More than I expected, you're a really nice guy. I like the ...

This isn't a whole chapter obviously, cos its too short, it's just a little section of one. There's probably a lot wrong with it, so tear it apart- constructively of ...

This was truly amazing. The structure is very different and interesting, in this case it's a very good thing and it catches the eye of the reader. The fact that ...

it might not be so good :) i did it at 12:30 pm :D A Never Ending Pain It’s eating away at my soul. My heart, becoming black like coal. ...