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I know some things aren't good so please review it :] THANKS Sweet Lies I think it’s about time you knew, How much pain you put me through. Each lie ...

Whoa!! This was amazing!! I would've never guessed that in the end it was a basketball! The first time I read it, I was thinking This poor girl, this is ...

Twilight Before , [you need the comma there!!] I was alone In darkness and in doubt Until you showed me the way out Your shining face Revealed to me my ...

You always make me laugh. You never make me cry. Please don't let this be my last goodbye. More than I expected, you're a really nice guy. I like the ...

This isn't a whole chapter obviously, cos its too short, it's just a little section of one. There's probably a lot wrong with it, so tear it apart- constructively of ...

Thanks for the critque!! It was really helpful and I'll change it the best I can. :] Well I have a bit more to the chapter but I didn't get ...

I sat there on the soft, warm sand thinking about her. I lay on the back of my arm and tilted my head allowing the wind to whisk my hair ...

Hey Alyss! Thanks for telling me the caps rule :]. hahaha. Well thanks for offering your reviewing skills to me and touring of the site...if that makes any sense. hmm ...

This was truly amazing. The structure is very different and interesting, in this case it's a very good thing and it catches the eye of the reader. The fact that ...

it might not be so good :) i did it at 12:30 pm :D A Never Ending Pain It’s eating away at my soul. My heart, becoming black like coal. ...

Hmmm...well i usually write teen fiction or realistic fiction i guess... my all time favorite book??? I have no idea...ive read to many books that ive liked as for the ...

Hey im Dee Dee E.!! I'm new around here...joined two days ago... I think... Well anyway, I'm usually really shy and suck at introductions but I'll just try my best. ...