Deathcurrent

Watch out for some grammatical issues. At the end one that was most prominent to me was the "Im". It threw me out of the poem. Which is amazing and ...

Oh wow! I have a really great picture in my head. Amazing imagery and voice. Keep it up! I like the last line the best. Are you going to write ...

It definitely goes with the French Revolution. The intro is my favorite as well. I like it! I'm going to add it. Keep up the amazing poems.

Please let me know how it is! I'd appreciate feedback before I get too far. :) NOTE: Reaper's name will be changing! I just haven't found a good name yet. ...

That's sad but beautiful. I hope that this was written with good intentions, because the end sounds a little on the harsh side. Don't forget them! Just let the memories ...