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Re: Insufficient - Prologue
Good prologue. Makes me want to keep reading. The only thing I would change slightly is the way the second part of the guards dialogue is delivered. You wrote: "You ...
Apr 16, 2016
Good prologue. Makes me want to keep reading. The only thing I would change slightly is the way the second part of the guards dialogue is delivered. You wrote: "You ...
Apr 16, 2016
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