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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Insufficient - Prologue

    Good prologue. Makes me want to keep reading. The only thing I would change slightly is the way the second part of the guards dialogue is delivered. You wrote: "You ...

    Apr 16, 2016


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening