DeathBecomesHer

thank you so much! i really appreciate it :)

Hello! I appreciate the review but a lot of the things you pointed out would've made sense if you had read the previous part of the story. Not that I ...

first of all, your username gives me life. second, I really appreciate the positive review! this is my first poem I've posted and im really thankful for the positive feedback!

honestly, I had 0 motivation to continue this story because I thought nobody liked it anymore. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! and I relate, I love stories that are ...

I do not believe in god, but I used to at one point when I was a child so I get where you're coming from. however, if you look at ...

since you said you liked the dark themes, might I suggest you check out a series I've posted called Nothing? its much darker than this and I think you might ...

oh my god thank you! I really appreciate the review since this is the first poem I've done. I might do more but I'm not sure yet.. but thank you ...

thank you so much! you words mean a lot to me and I really appreciate it. I just wanted to let you know that this wasn't meant to be a ...

idk what happened but it posted twice. i dont know how to delete the second one but i only got points for one comment so i guess it doesnt matter

I like where this is going. Everyone loves a good old stalker case. It adds interest and suspense to the story. I would suggest, keeping your paragraphs a little shorter, ...

"Every fairytale needs a good old-fashioned villain" - Jim Moriarty

yes i agree, i do have a slight obsession with gore, but it is a horror story. its supposed to be unsettling. anyways, the characters opinions arent necessarily my own, ...

Hello again! Im glad you appreciate the characters humor, i was scared it might be a little too off character but whateverrrr. Im going to continue to experiment with different ...

im sorry, i cannot tell you this information yet XD

Hello again! I was afraid you would be disappointed in this chapter because it was as shrouded in mystery as the others. But, I'm glad you liked it! Again my ...