Dearws

Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my eyes, Don't say goodbye, learn the truth- behind the lies. Read my lips, ...

Your poem is extremely good. Atleast in my eyes it is. It made my heart clench and relate to the pain that's depicted in the words. I find that many ...

First, I must apologize. I originally decided to reply to this only to obtain points so that I could post my own work. I am extremely glad that I clicked ...

At first the first two lines didn't seem to connect at all and so as I read through everything I tried to find the connection, then I realized, why should ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I have no clue why no one has replied to you yet. Did you write this yourself or did someone else? Don't take offense to ...

After I reread the poem (I had read through it quickly the first time because it has that kind of pull) I understood it more... i think. Its about the ...

Before I say anything I just need to get it across that I'm new here. Okay, anyway I though the depth of your poem, the meaning behind the words, the ...