Dearws

First, I must apologize. I originally decided to reply to this only to obtain points so that I could post my own work. I am extremely glad that I clicked ...

At first the first two lines didn't seem to connect at all and so as I read through everything I tried to find the connection, then I realized, why should ...

Saving all the rest of them the man lost his son and wife. Saving all the rest of them the old dog lost his life. Saving all the rest of ...

Okay, I've got to say I loved it! It reminded me of "The Twilight Zone" and I love that show! Very good!

I really enjoyed reading this. I have no clue why no one has replied to you yet. Did you write this yourself or did someone else? Don't take offense to ...

I've writen up to the 5th chapter of this, this is chapter 1. But the thing is I don't know what to call it. Please give suggestions if you have ...

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I'm not sure if this belongs here, cause I'm not so sure what lyric poetry is... oh well! tell me what your thinking anyway. For Him Should I Let Go? ...

After I reread the poem (I had read through it quickly the first time because it has that kind of pull) I understood it more... i think. Its about the ...

Before I say anything I just need to get it across that I'm new here. Okay, anyway I though the depth of your poem, the meaning behind the words, the ...