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If I'm not too late to join, here's my character, if I am too late, no worries. :wink: Name: Aurora (Raurie for short) Gender: Girl Age: 15 Appearance: She has ...

Woot! First review. :lol: Okay, here goes. Over All I liked it a lot, but the repeating stanza in the middle threw me off the first time that I read ...

That was truly, well, awesome. I noticed it was long, but i didn't really think anything of it because I guess my attention span is a bit longer than that ...

Oh I forgot; Gold Star! -Dearie

Hola. I liked it. I don't know about some other people around here, but I think it's funny. Like Mimi, my favorite was the cricket. I must seem like a ...

So, I'm new to YWS. (obviously :wink:) I enjoy pretzels, writing, people, and music, in-fact, I play the piano. And quite well, if I do say so myself. Any advice ...

Wow. I really enjoyed this poem; I love the way you used the phrasing and organized you're lines. It's pretty. :wink: Nitpicks e.g. compliments & grammar bleached petals like paper; ...

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Hey Trikky. I enjoyed reading this, even with the lack of length, it's really well written and I like your style. I clicked on this just because of the title, ...