Deanie

Hi Blue! I have to say, for someone who has missed your writing so much you have made me very happy reading this again. I have to say a great ...

Thanks for the review! Yes, I did mean to put woman. And I was trying to experiment with punctuation in this poem which was why there were so many included!

Well at one point it becomes the king vs. Sky... I think I might explain this to you in chat one time :3 I didn't want to go into the ...

Thanks for reviewing a second time, Savvy! Yes, it's a pantoum kind of poem ;)

Thanks for the great review Savvy! I will definitely be working on some of these things :)

Oh, I am so surprised you remembered! Yes, they are, but now they are too small for me :( Gah, so many typos >< I need to get better at ...

Ah you posted one more! I am going to sleep now actually. I will come back for the last two chapters soon ^^

Thanks for working your way through my poetry and reviewing it all today

Thanks for the two reviews! And all you need to know about climbing rhyme here:

I will keep you updated! There's a lot more to this story to be done, and congrats on being all caught up! As always, thanks for all the help with ...

Thanks so much for the super helpful review Trident! I think this makes a lot more sense if you read my whole novel, but I can understand why that would ...

Thanks for the great review :)

Argh, so many sentences that could've used a lot more shaping up here. I'm not sure it was a filler chapter - I wanted to show her drunkness for a ...