Deanie

I live for challenges :P Sounds like a proper novel you have there. Looking forwards to it. And I saw you cut it down to "YWS chapters" which are smaller ...

xD Okay. I love people called Ginger who are gingers.

Suspense! Yeah, I understand better now. So does that mean Irem might show up a smidge more in future chapters because well... he's the love interest? Or does his story ...

Y'know you didn't do too badly with the romance here. It was definitely there. It was just it seemed like a fill-in chapter, but not one that you could cut ...

Thank you for such a detailed and speedy review! I will look over put more explanatory things in my essay and less of the industrialism in the one you pointed ...

No problem :) Thank you for fixing me there, sorry for my mistake! It was a good chapter in all.

Thank you :)

I understand, but don't make it too confusing or the reader might not understand the plot at all. It's good to go fast if it's the affect you want, but ...

Thanks

Love it love it love it but you already know that

" " like those things. You need one at the beginning of speech and one at the end. Sometimes you missed the one at the end. Or you used one ...

Thank youuu

Oh okay then :) Maybe next time you post something then.

Oh an please, do let me know when you post another chapter again! (if you choose to or if you are busy making a manga/anime thing :D

:o Down for editing already? I missed my chance to read it >.> (Let me know when it's back!)