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Deanie

Deanie

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Meztere (1.1)

    Hey there Lauren! I'm going to try my best to review this, because I find it really hard to review almost-spotless chapters! I loved the opening line, and how you ...

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Deja Vu

    Thank you for the lovely review Cheetah!

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Shut Down

    Thank you!

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Shut Down

    I can see where you got the idea of Attack on Titan being my inspiration. But in this case it was more so a book/film called BFG by Rhoald Dahl

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Shut Down

    Thanks for the review! :)

    Dec 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: LAPIS :Chapter 3:

    Oh okay! Don't forget to really put that in about Kasami's character then. It would be nice for all readers to know ^^

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Flitchling: Chapter 3

    Hey there Anabel! Another chapter that I absolutely adored. Characters, descriptions, everything. You've got a perfect balance of emotions and settings, interior and exterior happenings that puts ever

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 17

    Glad to hear your working on it! And I don't mind waiting. As long as the story's the best it can be! :D No problem ;)

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Melting Diamonds

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it :D

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Melting Diamonds

    Thanks for the review Phoebe!

    Dec 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Melting Diamonds

    I will edit out all those spelling mistakes. I will admit this is something I wrote and immediately posted... which is usually how all my works are. Thank you for ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Live in the moment

    Auxi!

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Dada

    Thank you for reviewing and your feedback! Another poem that should do with some editing soon, heh. I need to find the time :) Are you trying to get through ...

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Unbroken

    Hey there! I heard this was edited and up again, so I decided I would take a look at it again to see if I can review the new version! ...

    Nov 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Release

    It's been a while :) Thanks for your review! I will take all suggestions in when I next edit it.

    Nov 25, 2013


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